I'm looking for a bit of feedback on this work I'm doing for my portfolio. https://vimeo.com/96135692

closed as off-topic by Arnoud Traa, AJ Henderson, ObscureRobot, Mark Durham, Rory Alsop May 25 '14 at 20:18

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  • "This question does not appear to be about sound design, within the scope defined in the help center." – AJ Henderson, ObscureRobot, Mark Durham, Rory Alsop
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  • @AJHenderson A "Music Video Without Music" is a produced pop music video that has had the original audio track replaced with sound effects and raw vocals. OP is asking for critique on his sound design--this has nothing to do with video production. – NReilingh May 25 '14 at 7:16
  • (see also) – NReilingh May 25 '14 at 7:23
  • @nreilingh ah, still not sure if the critique fits well, but thanks for explaining what it is. – AJ Henderson May 25 '14 at 13:29